Areas for Improvement

In addition to my strengths, I also faced many challenges throughout the year. Some of these being writing over extended periods of time, sentence fluency, and organizing my writing. When writing over extended periods of time, I would often come to points where I was at a loss for words and or ideas. Blogging has helped me to fix this issue, however, I still sometimes suffer from this occasional "Writer's Block," most often when I am working on formal essays. In order to get over this issue, I switch to another task and then come back to my paper, which generally helps. Another personal challenge that I faced this year was with sentence fluency. When proof-reading my essays, I would come across sentences that were not as smooth as they should be. As the year has passed, I have become better at adding transitions and making my writing have a more fluid rhythm. A major challenge for me this year was in organizing my writing. In the beginning of the year I struggled to structure my writing in a cohesive way. Even though I still stumble with this, I have gotten better at it with the aid of graphic organizers and proficient pre-writing. I will continue to work on all of these issues into the next school year, and hopefully perfect some of them by the time I graduate. Writing over extended periods of time, sentence fluency, and organization are all extremely important to me because they all have to do with my style of writing. Since everyone's style of writing differs slightly, it is essential that I be the best version of myself that I can. If I continue to do my best and improve upon my writing, then I will hopefully get into a good college.

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